graphics:
hardly any effort was put into this at all. completely disproportionate muscles and little stubs for fists on the first guy, then the second guy (which you looped 100 times over) looked like a badly drawn muppet baby. 3 frames of animation in this entire thing. the rest was just copying and pasting, whether it was the same symbol over and over or images stolen from google searches.
sound:
same damn thing over and over with a lousy tacked on techno beat. it was an earsore. couldn't stand it. we've all heard this stupid joke before, why is it necessary to hammer it into the dirt?
humor:
the comedy here is completely non existant to anyone but a select group of nerds who frequent a certain hentai imageboard and go to anti scientology rallies.
overall:
i would say completely ditch the 4chan theme and work on your artistic and creative skills a lot more. work on your FBF, add more drawings. try to use more of your own artwork instead of that series of lame jpegs and memes that has become so stale and overused nowadays. be more original than that.
More like 2010 frames, it's called "style", etc. Not everything has to be ass-raped into perfection. Plus the bad drawing is part of the overall joke.
An earsore? Then turn your volume down.
And you are an idiot. Anyone who appreciates a good joke to an old meme will find this funny. Most of the people who are 10ing this don't even know what 4chan is. Most channers don't go to cancer raids anymore.
Coming from the SS, this is the funniest paragraph on this page. Not by the fact that you mistook a quick Flash shat that I took for actual work, but because you're pointing out the exact point of the flash and preaching for originality.
GO!GO!7188 (go go nana ichi hachi hachi), also known as GO!GO! 7188 and simply Gogo, is a Japanese rock band with a strong surf influence. The band was formed in June of 1998 by Yumi Nakashima (nicknamed Yuu) and Akiko Hamada (nicknamed Akko), both alumnae of the same year at Shoyo High School in Kagoshima, Kyûshû. The band's drummer, Turkey, joined in 1999 and they debuted on Breast/milia, a division of Capitol Records (Toshiba-EMI) in 2000. The meaning of the band's name is known only to its members.
GO!GO!7188 (go go nana ichi hachi hachi), also known as GO!GO! 7188 and simply Gogo, is a Japanese rock band with a strong surf influence. The band was formed in June of 1998 by Yumi Nakashima (nicknamed Yuu) and Akiko Hamada (nicknamed Akko), both alumnae of the same year at Shoyo High School in Kagoshima, Kyûshû. The band's drummer, Turkey, joined in 1999 and they debuted on Breast/milia, a division of Capitol Records (Toshiba-EMI) in 2000. The meaning of the band's name is known only to its members.
GO!GO!7188 (go go nana ichi hachi hachi), also known as GO!GO! 7188 and simply Gogo, is a Japanese rock band with a strong surf influence. The band was formed in June of 1998 by Yumi Nakashima (nicknamed Yuu) and Akiko Hamada (nicknamed Akko), both alumnae of the same year at Shoyo High School in Kagoshima, Kyûshû. The band's drummer, Turkey, joined in 1999 and they debuted on Breast/milia, a division of Capitol Records (Toshiba-EMI) in 2000. The meaning of the band's name is known only to its members.
GO!GO!7188 (go go nana ichi hachi hachi), also known as GO!GO! 7188 and simply Gogo, is a Japanese rock band with a strong surf influence. The band was formed in June of 1998 by Yumi Nakashima (nicknamed Yuu) and Akiko Hamada (nicknamed Akko), both alumnae of the same year at Shoyo High School in Kagoshima, Kyûshû. The band's drummer, Turkey, joined in 1999 and they debuted on Breast/milia, a division of Capitol Records (Toshiba-EMI) in 2000. The meaning of the band's name is known only to its members.
GO!GO!7188 (go go nana ichi hachi hachi), also known as GO!GO! 7188 and simply Gogo, is a Japanese rock band with a strong surf influence. The band was formed in June of 1998 by Yumi Nakashima (nicknamed Yuu) and Akiko Hamada (nicknamed Akko), both alumnae of the same year at Shoyo High School in Kagoshima, Kyûshû. The band's drummer, Turkey, joined in 1999 and they debuted on Breast/milia, a division of Capitol Records (Toshiba-EMI) in 2000. The meaning of the band's name is known only to its members.
GO!GO!7188 (go go nana ichi hachi hachi), also known as GO!GO! 7188 and simply Gogo, is a Japanese rock band with a strong surf influence. The band was formed in June of 1998 by Yumi Nakashima (nicknamed Yuu) and Akiko Hamada (nicknamed Akko), both alumnae of the same year at Shoyo High School in Kagoshima, Kyûshû. The band's drummer, Turkey, joined in 1999 and they debuted on Breast/milia, a division of Capitol Records (Toshiba-EMI) in 2000. The meaning of the band's name is known only to its members.
GO!GO!7188 (go go nana ichi hachi hachi), also known as GO!GO! 7188 and simply Gogo, is a Japanese rock band with a strong surf influence. The band was formed in June of 1998 by Yumi Nakashima (nicknamed Yuu) and Akiko Hamada (nicknamed Akko), both alumnae of the same year at Shoyo High School in Kagoshima, Kyûshû. The band's drummer, Turkey, joined in 1999 and they debuted on Breast/milia, a division of Capitol Records (Toshiba-EMI) in 2000. The meaning of the band's name is known only to its members.
GO!GO!7188 (go go nana ichi hachi hachi), also known as GO!GO! 7188 and simply Gogo, is a Japanese rock band with a strong surf influence. The band was formed in June of 1998 by Yumi Nakashima (nicknamed Yuu) and Akiko Hamada (nicknamed Akko), both alumnae of the same year at Shoyo High School in Kagoshima, Kyûshû. The band's drummer, Turkey, joined in 1999 and they debuted on Breast/milia, a division of Capitol Records (Toshiba-EMI) in 2000. The meaning of the band's name is known only to its members.
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You've got potential. I ask that you don't waste it on something so blatantly unoriginal.
Graphics: well, the only thing you drew yourself was at the very end of the flash. Sprites are a real minus, in my book. They take absolutely no skill at all unless they are custom sprites. And they take very little effort as well.
Style: Well lets see. It's a video game flash. Now, normally, I am one of the biggest video game flash haters of all time. They reek of unoriginality. HOWEVER I can't help but be brought back to the times when I played Mario Land for Gameboy... man, good times. Took me forever to beat that game. So, I guess if you were ever to make a video game flash (which I strongly suggest you NEVER DO AGAIN), this is the right video game to parody. All other mario parodies can go suck it. Super Mario Land is the only one that can make me nostalgic. Its one of the only video games I've ever played really extensively. That being said, I still disliked the unoriginality of the setting and the style, but I'll let it slide since not many other people have done flashes about this particular Mario game, and that cancels out some of your unoriginality.
Sound: Probably the best part of the flash was the sound. You not only used all the level songs (god for some reason I love the level 4 music... makes me happy) but you also used some very funny and creative sound clips in there that you apparently uncovered from various movies. The only funny jokes lied in these sound clips. I like the black guy sound clips the best. The Queen song at the end is a great song but I didn't particularly like seeing the song ruined with video game graphics... I mean, I like the videogame you parodied, but Bohemian Rhapsody is far above such gay things as video games and flash animation.
Violence: he hopped on a few enemy's heads.... ya....
Interactivity: preloader
Humor: As mentioned before, the sound clips from movies were the best part, I got a few chuckles out of it. Some of the situations were fairly amusing as well, but I could've laughed at them a lot harder if they hadn't been in video game form. Anyways, I think you've got a lot of funny ideas and a lot of potential, and you should stop wasting it on video game parodies. This site has enough of them already.
Overall: This is probably the best score I've ever given a video game flash in recent memory, because you used a good game. The only other game I think would go well in flash is SOCOM. All other video game parodies can suck my balls.
Be glad that your flash was good enough to be an exception. If I, of all people, enjoyed it, then the rest of Newgrounds will probably jizz all over their keyboards upon seeing the title.
Hmmm...you've made some pretty valid points here. I used sprites because it's a Super Mario Land flash. It would be no where near as nostalgic if I had drawn it all out. As much as I enjoy receiving 10's for review scores, a 5 by you standards obviously means about a 25 by "normal" NG standards. Bohemian Rhapsody was used to glorify the flash, not to degrade the song itself. I'm dissappointed that you saw it that way, but I can understand your logic. Thanks for the review man.
I loved it. Especially the part with the little fox flying off the cliff. Of all of the pieces I think that would've been the best idea to finish into a flash because the song was so good.
I also noticed several entries that must have been intended for Clock Day 05.
Anyways, great job.
Turning and turning in the widening gyre; The falcon cannot hear the falconer; Things fall apart; the center cannot hold; Mere anarchy is loosed upon the world nigga