ManaCloud's Mana Realm It's still sloppy.
IMO this was still very sloppily done. First of all, the artwork was very unattractive. To be honest, ALL of the backgrounds looked like shit. The characters had sickeningly drawn bodies, but the faces were OK (although they look copied from better drawings). The sound throughout the flash was absolutely shameful, your audio design is very poor. The voice acting was without any feeling and the music didn't fit. Worst of all was the sound effects, which came out too repetitive and loud, almost breaking my speakers. The story was just a bunch of crap throw together and was difficult to follow. And why did the flash just END so abruptly? Anyways, work on making everything in the flash seem less.... bad. I don't know hwat else to tell you.